Axel The Eternal

This is his story, please read it if you wish to know him ^ ^:

Long time ago, The Black Dragons called Rescendium, are the founders of the Arqui´or, Arca´en, and Arde´um arts. Those three are magic arts, the first one means "manipulation" (which the dragons ude to manipulate the elements), the second one means "healing", and the last one means "seals". Axel hasn´t posses an art yet because he didn´t decided yet. Bet before that, he met a human woman named Sophia, a beautiful woman who felt in love with Axel, and he was feeling the same thing (note: not love of.. you know... love of affection) They´re together, until she told him that she was a goddess in a human form for the duty of seeking the peace in this twisted world. So Axel was more happy for that and that didn´t changed his mind about here, and she was happy for that too.

Until some people (it doen´t really mater which species) heard that and they decide to kill her because they though that she might use her power to conquer the world or some selfish ideas. So they ran after them, they hold Axel to stop him and they attack Sophia, she didn´t do anything because she never use her power for killing. after watching her been stabbed her a lot of times, Axel´s rage increase and makes him destructive. He killed all those people, but it was too late.

She was Dying, but after she dissappear, she say to him, "use my power to bring peace, and to stop that the hatred chain have more links..." After that, she became to light and it became as tattoos on Axel´s right arm.
Axel was devastated, his heat was broken, and he was alone. But he was thinking what she say before, in order to stop those assassinations, he must give punisment for those who have their hearts a piece of darkness and send them judgement. And then, he dissappear from the world with his identity.

With Sophia´s power, he has an unique art that no one has it, that it cam be used against the darkness on the hearts, and it has a second effect, if he has the power of a god, then he lives for the eternity, all his people died by the pass of the time, except him, and the time passed ans passed until he reach the time of Orion and Alice...

Phew... finally, that´s all... So what do you think about my "bad guy" of the second part of my story?